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新课标八年级单元测试写作:我的理想

发布时间:2013-06-26 18:00浏览次数:9262
要求:

我喜欢英语,我想在10年以后当一位英语老师。我要尽可能教好我的学生。我要尽量用英语讲课。我要努力使我的课讲得生动有趣。

另外,学生们都喜欢听老师讲故事,所以我要经常给学生讲英语故事,使他们对英语感兴趣,从而能提高他们的听力。我相信我能成为一个好老师的。


词数:

80左右

用户的作文(系统评分68.0分
评语:

采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者词汇基础挺好,能灵活使用部分高级词汇,但词汇拼写要再接再厉。

用户练习作文:

I had a feeling that Ganz wouldn’t accept the balanced qty of TAI63 and all the Taupe holders even when we offered reduced pricing because they can’t have one batch of goods with different quality or sell them at different prices. Hope you can salvage the electric components of the rejected 726pcs of TAI63, thank you for trying to re-work them! RE: Thanks for fighting with Ganz so many times, we understand one batch goods can not sell at different prices. If you look at the text illustration on the last jpg which was an inspection picture taken on 7/13, it says ‘90% less embossed Major’. However, the last inspection picture taken in Feb (1st jpg) indicated ‘80% less embossed minor’. I just want to make sure that the 1074 acceptable pieces look like the sample on the right of the 1st jpg as well as Photo 4 that Ganz accepted. The 726pcs that looked like the middle one of the 1st jpg and Photo 3 are rejected. RE: Yes, 1074pcs look like the sample in photo 4 that GANZ accepted. The 726 pcs that looked like the sample in photo 3. Ganz has canceled the balanced qty of TAI66, 68, 69

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