高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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My favorite sport is play football.when i was going home,I get a football.Then i play it with my friends.because of this things,I fall in love with football. I usually take part in match with my friends.My favourite star is beakham.in the furture,iwant to become a prfessional football player.i hope it will be real.