作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;句法方面做得很棒,但是从句不多;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。
"Ghost" in the world does not exist, but the ghost culture still exists in human society, it is the progress of human culture and development, has a negligible impact. Almost every country in the world has a special "ghost" and ghost culture. In Japan the ghosts, devils in animal forms,western vampires and so on. Ghost "culture, and the human society are closely linked to the totem worship from the primitive society to the modern society's personal beliefs," ghost "increasingly from a natural phenomenon of fear for a more important cultural symbol, become the contemporary social" culture "of the important part of the. In different societies, different countries, they have their own different development curve, although it is so, but they are in the development of their own culture to occupy a pivotal position. In many countries, the "ghost" culture occupies a place in the society. In China, if borrowed from the French scholar Groat said a word, that is: "in the Chinese people...... It seems that the ghost of the dead is kept in close contact with the living...... Of course, there is a dividing line between the living and the dead, but the dividing line is very vague...... The ghost is actually the fate of the living. In this regard, the Chinese people have a deep feeling, this kind of "ghost" culture, not only in ancient times, even in modern times, it also affects China's social, political, cultural, art, philosophy and other fields; in japan,"Ghost" is also a long history, it has a significant impact on the spiritual life of the Japanese, as early as in the era of peace, Japan The court will hold a ghost in the last day of December, in order to dispel ghosts brought misfortune, usher in peace and happiness New season. In the Nara period, China culture and Buddhism was introduced to Japan, the meaning of the ghost is expanding, the ghost is plus In a lot of concepts such as "terrorist, Japan ryouiki" legend on the ghost man eating records. And now, "ghost" text In Japan is still relatively prosperous, such as Aichi Prefecture and other places are held every year for the smooth growth of spring crops sacrifice Activities, in which the symbol of the disaster as a symbol of the ghosts were driven. In these sacrificial activities the ghost represents the disaster, the Transport, disease and drive at the same time, people also hope and pray to God, get rid of disaster usher in a happy life.