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2008年专八英语作文真题:College years have prepared you for your future life

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:17浏览次数:4046
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题目 College years have prepared you for your future life
说明 In a few months' time you are going to graduate from university. How do you think your college years have prepared you for your future life? Write an essay of about 400 words on the following topic: What I have learned from my years at university
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
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作者词汇基础扎实;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

"Ghost" in the world does not exist, but the ghost culture still exists in human society, it is the progress of human culture and development, has a negligible impact. Almost every country in the world has a special "ghost" and ghost culture. In Japan the ghosts, devils in animal forms,western vampires and so on. Ghost "culture, and the human society are closely linked to the totem worship from the primitive society to the modern society's personal beliefs," ghost "increasingly from a commom phenomenon of fear for a more important cultural symbol, become the contemporary social" culture "of the important part of the. In different societies, different countries, they have their own different developments curve, although it is that, they are in the development of their own culture to occupy a pivotal position. In many countries, the "ghost" culture occupies a place in the society. In China, if borrowed from the French scholar Groat said a word, that is: "in the Chinese people...... It seems that the ghost of the dead is kept in close contact with the living...... Of course, there is a dividing line between the living and the dead, but the dividing line is very vague...... The ghost is actually the fate of the living. In this regard, the Chinese people have a deep feeling, this kind of "ghost" culture, not only in ancient times, even in modern times, it also affects China's social, political, cultural, art, philosophy and other fields;While in Japan,"Ghost" is also a long history, it has a significant impact on the spiritual life of the Japanese, as early as in the era of peace, Japan The court will hold a ghost in the last day of December, in order to dispel ghosts brought misfortune, usher in peace and happiness. In the Nara period, China culture and Buddhism was introduced to Japan, and the meaning of the ghost is expanding, the ghost is plus. In a lot of concepts such as "terrorist, Japan legend on the ghost man eating records. Now, "ghost" text in Japan is still relatively prosperous, such as Aichi Prefecture and other places are held every year for the smooth growth of spring crops sacrifice activities, in which the symbol of the disaster as a symbol of the ghosts was driven. In these sacrificial activities, the ghost represents the disaster, the transport, disease and drive at the same time, people also hope and pray to God, get rid of disaster usher in a happy life.

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