2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(63)写作:期末考试

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Thank you for sending me your photos.You wonder who the person I thank most is.Now let me tell you. My mother is my most thankful person in the world.She is fifty-five years old,but she looks like in her thirties.She is a little fat,wears a glasses on her face.Playing a card game which called "Daer" is her favorite hobby.She was a Chinese teacher and she has retired for five years.In fact,she was my Chinese teacher and head teacher when I at middle school. She not only tought me knowledge in the school but also tought me everything in my life.She took most of her time to bring me up.She took care of me whenever she was,and she always stayed beside me whatever happened. In a word,She is the most important person of mine. At this time,I want say something to her,"Thank you!mom!"So,absolutely she is the person I want to thank most.