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2008年专八英语作文真题:College years have prepared you for your future life

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:17浏览次数:4061
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题目 College years have prepared you for your future life
说明 In a few months' time you are going to graduate from university. How do you think your college years have prepared you for your future life? Write an essay of about 400 words on the following topic: What I have learned from my years at university
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分67.5分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,高级词汇可适量增加;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。

用户练习作文:

China and the West are exclusive to "ghost" festival, folk is to spread a large number of folk stories and legends, the emergence and existence of "Halloween" are attempted to take to deal with the relationship between a man and a ghost, and under different cultural background and their generation a corresponding interpretation system and ritual criterion. (a) "ghost culture in china" "Ghost" refers to the spirit of the human body after death. We can recognize the "ghost" of the Chinese people from the Chinese traditional literature books: "the book of rites, offering righteousness:" all creatures are mortal, dead will return the scholar, the predicate ghost. " The "Shuowen Jiezi" said: "people are classified as a ghost. From the people, like a ghost. The ghost of Yin to cause injury to, from si. All the demons are from the ghost. From the classical show. Juwei cut. Ancient ghost,." The Duan Yucai's "Annotation" further explains what is the ghost: "people into ghost. To and for training. Release said. The ghost is also to say. Guo Shi Zi note cited. The ancient is dead for the people. Master Zuo's Spring and Autumn Annals Sub production. The ghost has the return. Is not fierce. The gift of the day. Air return to the sky. The soul to return to form. From the children, like Fu. And it's a ghost. From it. Two words Fill. It read as private. Therefore, from the ghost Yin to cause injury to it. As a Yin yin. This means also said from si. Shenyang ghost yin. Yang male privacy. Juwei cut. Fifteen. All the demons are from the ghost." That is to say "ghost" word is a glyph, show the ancient Chinese ancestors for the ghost of the shape of imagination: the following is a person, above is a strange terrible head. The ghost, although the death of people, but it is more than a lot of powerful force. We from the various literary works or film and television works can see: ghost can fly, walk through walls, stealth will spell, even can also be attached to the body of the living body.

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