采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;熟练使用了一些长难句。
I have a good friend, His name is leave,He is 33,He is tall and thin,sometimes He is serious and sometimes kindly,and sometimes he is fun like a little boy. One day,He told me that He wanted to buy a pig, I asked him why? He smiled and said:"it is so cute" but i think that it is for get some money that we breed a pig .