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字数:300 满分:100分
语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用。
Speaking of that,we have to reflect that there is a part of girls or boys Indulge in others pretty face or hot figure and fall in love with so-call the other half as well as promise love each other to love everlasting and unchanging and die, never give up .It is said love makes us blind and fool ,in the relationship we should more listen lookers who are clearest.