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字数:300 满分:100分
可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;作者词汇表达丰富度较高,就是高级词汇用的太少;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
At the beginning of the book, I felt sorry so much for Pierre Grangoi who is a poor and homeless poet live like a beggar even less. Because he hardly dies of a beggar's skill test. Thanks to the 16-year-old gypsy girl named Gypsy Esmeralda, pretending to be agreed to marry him to save his life. Attracted by her graceful dance and kind soul,he tried to pursue her but to refused and be told that valiant Knight her Mr.Right.Such a pathetic man desire nothing but to live after that.Esmeralda is my favorite character, she has the most beautiful semblance and a noble and chaste good mind. In addition ,she is courageous,generous,enthusiastic and love freedom.