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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33651
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分70.5分
评语:

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;作者词汇表达丰富度较高,就是高级词汇用的太少;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

At the beginning of the book, I felt sorry so much for Pierre Grangoi who is a poor and homeless poet live like a beggar even less. Because he hardly dies of a beggar's skill test. Thanks to the 16-year-old gypsy girl named Gypsy Esmeralda, pretending to be agreed to marry him to save his life. Attracted by her graceful dance and kind soul,he tried to pursue her but to refused and be told that valiant Knight her Mr.Right.Such a pathetic man desire nothing but to live after that.Esmeralda is my favorite character, she has the most beautiful semblance and a noble and chaste good mind. In addition ,she is courageous,generous,enthusiastic and love freedom.

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