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字数:300 满分:100分
语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇。
Speaking of that,we have to reflect that there is a part of girls or boys Indulge in others pretty face or hot figure and fall in love with their so-called the other half as well as promise love each other to love everlasting and unchanging and die, never give up .It is said love makes us blind and fool ,in the relationship we should more listen lookers whom are clearest.here is an internet catchphrase that There is such a lot of (things on the )world to see.I guess it is our common dreams and we must be strggle for it.