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2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:33浏览次数:3099
要求:
题目 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?
说明 Nowadays the Internet has become part of people's life, and millions of young people have made friends online.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分39.5分
评语:

文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少;单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短。

用户练习作文:

There is such a lot of (things on the )world to see.I believe it is our common dreams and we must be struggle for it in unique ways on life roads.For this,good luck.There is such a lot of (things on the )world to see.I believe it is our common dreams and we must be struggle for it in unique ways on life roads.For this,good luck.

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