文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少;单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短。
There is such a lot of (things on the )world to see.I believe it is our common dreams and we must be struggle for it in unique ways on life roads.For this,good luck.There is such a lot of (things on the )world to see.I believe it is our common dreams and we must be struggle for it in unique ways on life roads.For this,good luck.
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