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1998年专八英语作文真题:城市化进程问题

发布时间:2013-05-18 12:06浏览次数:3955
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Nowadays with the development of economy, existing cities are growing bigger and new cities are appearing. What do you think is ONE of the major problems that may result from this process of urbanization? Write an essay of about 300 words on the topic given below. One major problem in the process of urbanization 
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

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Is there a ghost in the world? The answer for this question is no doubt to be negative. But in the long history of human development, there is no "ghost culture" of the accumulation of it? The answer is yes. As a subject of cultural phenomenon to study,although ghost does not exists in the world, ghost culture is very early widespread in human society, and serves as a pioneer in human culture, and created a precedent for the human culture ,and plays an indelible role in the development and progress of human culture. According to the research, the ghost culture, which is about six years ago, seven hundred thousand years ago, the product of the immortal concept of human childhood, from 1929 found about sixty-nine years ago the cave people in the north of the mountain, had used red powder sprinkled on the dead body. By analysis, there are two purposes: the first is because red with the blood of the same color, add some new blood to the dead; the second is that the dead "the immortality of the soul" also feels cold in the winter.So the dead were sprinkled some red, which symbols and adds some red carbon powder for the dead can protect them from the cold. In foreign countries, some archaeologists, successively in Italy and France, primitive human remains near, found buried flint and other kinds of stone, which although is the product of the stone age is hope that the soul of the deceased to continue to use these tools. From what has been discussed, it shows that at the primitive time, people believed that man was a soul; the person died after death; the soul of the body is the master of the body,and the death of the soul left the body and he went to the results. Therefore, at the ancient time, the burial custom is developed by the people for the dead companions and love. They think cremation or burial of the body and the soul can ascend to heaven; burial to the dead man's soul, the "cradle" of a stable and permanent return. Because of the ability of people to live in the spirit of a man, the man who is alive is afraid of it or wants to rely on it, begging for it. To people's life and social relations is added to the ghost world of fantasy, and after death, they held a variety of worship, such as necromancy, cast out the demons, ancestor worship and so on. So the primitive religious culture is formed. This religious culture, which is in the initial stage of human society, exists in the primitive society which is not yet written. It has a decisive influence on people's view of nature, history, morality, values, and so on. It has the social existence of primitive society, and the social and cultural behavior.

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