2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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As we can see from the picture,people who get a doctoral degree have higher earnings and lower unemplyments rates.Well,what can us see is that lower degrees make a very defferent phynoment. So,we can make a conclusion that education plays an imporent role in our daily life. Education is good for us in many ways, learning new things,solving problerms,getting on well with others...We get konwledge from education,we learn how to use the konwledge to work in a good methrod. What else, When learnning history,we can use those old histories as our experence.Which is so expensive. It is never too old to learn.Education like bread to strong our beard.It is good tolls to make our work better.That is whymore and more people would like to recive high education.