Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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As we can see from the picture,people who get a doctoral degree have higher earnings and lower unemployment rates.Well,what can us see is that lower degrees make a very different phynoment. So,we can make a conclusion that education plays an important role in our daily life. Education is good for us in many ways, learning new things,solving problerms,getting on well with others...We get konwledge from education,and we learn how to use the konwledge to work in a good methrod. What else, when learnning history,we can use those histories as our experence.Which is so expensive. It is never too old to learn.Education like bread to strong our beard.It is good tolls to make our work better.That is why more and more people would like to receive high education.