2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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As we can see from the picture,people who get a doctoral degree have higher earnings and lower unemployment rates.Well,what can us see is that lower degrees make a very different phynomenon. So,we can make a conclusion that education plays an important role in our daily life. Education is good for us in many ways, learning new things,solving problerms,getting on well with others...We get knowledge from education,and we learn how to use the konwledge to work in a good method. What else, we can use some histories as our experence from what we learn .Which is so expensive. It is never too old to learn.Education like bread to strong our beards.It is good tolls to make our work better.That is why more and more people would like to receive high education.