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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46257
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Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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As we can see from the picture,people who get a doctoral degree have higher earnings and lower unemployment rates.Well,what can us see is that lower degrees make a very different phenomenon. So,we can make a conclusion that education plays an important role in our daily life. Education is good for us in many ways, learning new things,solving problems,getting on well with others...We get knowledge from education,and we learn how to use the knowledge to work in a good method. What else, we can use some histories as our experence from what we learn.Which is so expensive. It is never too old to learn.Education like bread to strong our beards.It is good tolls to make our work better.That is why more and more people would like to receive high education.

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