题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?
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Nowday,wherever you go,you can hear that parents talk about children's art classes.For example,some kids are sent to learn guitar at weekends.And some parents think their children ought to learn art, like drawing,playing the piano and so forth.Concerning this phenomenon,opinion vary from person to person. Some parents who are facor of send kids to art classes maintain that we need cultivate children's art sense when they are a little. And they can possess a skill or some skills to show their friends when they take part in activities.However there are many persons who argue that children should have more time to play with their mates.Taking the art classes spends most of their playing time.And art learning is hard for children and they don't want in their mind. As far as I'm concerned,every coin has two sides.Taking art classes also has advantages and disadvantages.Parents should recognize what are their kids' interested in and whether the children are happy when they are in the classes,and then make a decision.
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