作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;文中衔接词丰富。
The ghost culture in our country in the primitive society of the soil, and with the development of China's history has also experienced a continuous enrichment, variation, update process. Throughout the whole process, we find that the Chinese ghost culture has a distinct feature of the ghost culture in the whole world because of its special background. (a) the patriarchal clan system in the long term are closely combined with the Chinese concept of ghost and ancestral spirit, to give the Chinese ghost culture left a distinctive mark of the patriarchal clan system. (two) the widespread popularity of Taoism, so that China's ghost culture presents a debut of the wizard, ghosts, gods, fairy interlinked characteristics. Taoism is in Zhuangzi's philosophy as the theoretical basis, to folk magic and witchcraft as the main content and absorption part of the Confucianism, the Buddhism thought comprehensive and with Chinese characteristics system of religion. It has been two thousand years of history and has a very important position in the history of Chinese culture, which has a profound influence on many aspects of the ancient Chinese society, which has a great influence on the Chinese ghost culture. (three) the introduction of Buddhism to China's inherent concept of the concept of hell is rich and colorful Confucianism as the mainstream of traditional culture, because of its highly regarded "filial piety and righteousness" man of principle, its influence, Chinese ghost culture showing a strong ethics oriented characteristics. 双语对照