作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;全文结构较为严谨。
The Chinese ghost culture emerged in the soil of the primitive society.And with the development of China's history,Chinese ghost culture has also experienced a continuous enrichment, variation, updated process. Throughout the whole process, we find that Chinese ghost culture has a distinct feature of the ghost culture than other countries because of its specific background.Its main features are four points.Firstly,the patriarchal clan system in the long term is closely combined with the Chinese concept of ghost and ancestral spirit, giving Chinese ghost culture left a distinctive mark of the patriarchal clan system. Secondly, China's ghost culture presents a debut of the wizard, ghosts, gods, fairy interlinked characteristics with the widespread popularity of Taoism. Taoism is in Zhuangzi's philosophy as the theoretical basis, to folk magic and witchcraft as the main content and absorption part of the Confucianism, the Buddhism thought comprehensive and with Chinese characteristics system of religion. It has been two thousand years of history and has a very important position in the history of Chinese culture, which has a profound influence on many aspects of the ancient Chinese society, which has a great influence on the Chinese ghost culture. Thirdly, the introduction of Buddhism to China's inherent concept of the concept of hell is rich and colorful Confucianism as the mainstream of traditional culture, because of its highly regarded "filial piety and righteousness" man of principle, its influence, Chinese ghost culture showing a strong ethic oriented characteristics.