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小学二年级英语作文:Our house

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:49浏览次数:5597
要求:
用英语描述下自己的家,字数在100字以内.
用户的作文(系统评分64.5分
评语:

采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了。

用户练习作文:

The "ghost" in the dictionary is "spirit of a dead person that is seen the heard or by sb who is still living"". Here are two meanings: one is the "ghost" (ghost) is the soul of human death; two is the "ghost" (ghost) can be seen or heard by people. In the western literature, film and television works, we are common "ghost" is also the soul of the dead. Pale cheeks, eye shadow, wandering in the dark castle, night out, come and go like a shadow. In English, "ghost" and "ghost", often used in a derogatory color. "As "As ghost white" is a very pale ghost brand is a town ghost is a very popular, although it is still sold, but is no longer popular brand. And, with Chinese in "ghost", "ghost" is also used when commendatory words. For example, "this is the ghost walks" in English refers to the day on behalf of salary, this day is presumably all people are all very happy. There is "ghost in the machine" is used to refer to those figures out clear at the crucial moment.

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