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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(102):高考在即

发布时间:2015-05-29 14:24浏览次数:971
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假如你是李华,今年上高三,高考在即,看到大家每天为自己所做的一切,深有感触。
请根据下表提示,写一篇120左右的短文,可增加细节,适当发挥。
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用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
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句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。

用户练习作文:

China has a huge number of ghosts, a wide variety of ghost images combined into a world of human beings and the world of the world. The ancient Chinese believed that people in addition to immortality or fruition Buddhahood. The rest of the people will become a ghost, our men die, good good ghost, bad guys become ghosts, right to the point of ordinary people is not good and not evil ghost, so good ghost, evil, not good and not evil ghosts are many. And a small number of Western ghost, image is relatively single, did not form a system, its status is a heterogeneous rare erratic and indistinct. And because of the different religious and cultural system in China and the west, there is a very clear distinction between the folk custom and the religion. Chinese Buddhism system, the relationship between ghost and human beings, God is can transform each other, become a ghost after death, qualification of the highest ghost is God. The Taoist system is a Yin of the ghost, is a positive person. Orthodox Christianity is not recognized as a ghost, and that the ghost faith is a superstition. Christian either God or the enemy - the devil or Satan, or his men all sorts of ghosts is the symbol of evil, after death or go to heaven, or hell.

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