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The number of ghost in China is very huge,coloful in ghost images, which combines into a world of human beings and the world of the world. The ancient Chinese believed that in addition to immortality or fruition Buddhahood,people will become a ghost。people become a ghostafter death;good man become a good ghost, bad guys become evil ghost, right to the point of ordinary people is not good and not evil ghost, so good ghost, evil ghost , or not good and not evil ghost are many. However, the number of western ghost is rare, its image is relatively single and cannot form a system; its status is a heterogeneous rare erratic and indistinct. And because of the different religious and cultural system in China and the west, there is a very clear distinction between the folk custom and the religion. Chinese Buddhism system, the relationship between ghost and human beings, God can transform each other and become a ghost after death, The qualification of the highest ghost is God. The Taoist system is a Yin of the ghost, is a positive person. Orthodox Christianity is not recognized as a ghost, and that the ghost faith is a superstition. Christian either God or the enemy - the devil or Satan, or his men all sorts of ghosts is the symbol of evil, after death or go to heaven, or hell.