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As the development of Online Shopping,more and more people are shopping in the online,it is becoming moder life style. But that like a coin have two sides.On the on hand, shopping in the online is convenlient foe people to bue something in the mall ,and it is cheaper than buying in the shop.But on the another ,it is not very safty ,and it is very slowly than buying in the street. In my opinion, shopping on the online is a good way to buy mang things,but wo need to protect our buying safte.
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