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作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，高级词汇使用过少；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用。
Firstly,i am very appreciated of your coming. It is well-known that China is to be a country of hospitality. So, you will find that people in my hometown is enthusiastic to you. In actually, my hometown is a beautiful place where you are about to feel the fresh air and see the famous Lushan Mountain and the one of the largest lakes in the world celled Poyang Lake. Besides, you can visit the significant figure in the history of literature in China. I know you are a person loving food and you know the delicious food is very notable in China. Therefore, it is imperative to tell you the necessary place where you will eat your favorite food.
