2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，高级词汇使用过少；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。

Firstly,I am very appreciated of your coming. It is well-known that China is to be a country of hospitality. So, you will find that people in my hometown are enthusiastic about you. In actually, my hometown is a beautiful place where you are about to feel the fresh air and see the famous Lushan Mountain and the one of the largest lakes in the world celled Poyang Lake. Besides, you can visit the significant figure in the history of literature in China. I know you are a person who loves food and you know the delicious food is very notable in China. Therefore, it is imperative to tell you the necessary place where you will eat your favorite food.