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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句。
In the real world, you can usually see the picture which a wealthy person is somehow alone and unhappy and then has a smoke or drink beer or even take drugs to reduce the complicated emotion, however, on the other hand, a poor person which suffer from some difficulties sometimes such as a financial problem have a happy life because of the ability of dealing with that problems. In actually, Happiness is not perfect that is not the absence of problems as Freedom which is not absolute. If a man wants to sing song loudly in the dorm not only belonging to him in order to his happiness, it is selfish not real happy because your happiness leads to other's unhappiness and concludes a bad and unpleasant relationship. How to change those problems? First, you should face the fact that Happiness is not the absence of problems and perfect.Then,you should learn the ability to deal with those problems. You should keep an optimistic attitude and then build a good relationship by spending more time in getting along with other. Finally, I believe you will have a real happiness.
可可英语 - 划词释义
