简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;文章上下文衔接自然。
I have more friends,but only one is different of others.Her name is Fang.she is a quiet girl,she very like English.She is slower than me,but she is very strong.She works in Beijing,and wants to be an editor.We usually keep in touch by phone,sometimes by email.We usually talk something about job and life.She came to see me from Beijing last year.I bring her to eat delicious Cantonese dishes.Cantonese food is a bit light,so she very likes it.