2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(46):How to Get on with Our Parents

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As middle school students,there is the same problem that annoys all of us. Our parents always interfer everything about their children,which made them unhappy.Parents always cares anything and limit our deed in order to let us grow up heathily and happily.However,as time goes by, we certainly can't accept what they had done for us.Please do not take us as a child all the time.We understand what parents have done.Instead,please give us freedom we wish.We are growing.We want to have some place or some sercets and we would like to do something by ourselves enve though we would cry ,hurt.But just thourgh that thing can we get some lesson and grow fast.We should grow up instead of hiding ourselves under our parents.Let me fly whatever I meet,from which I can grow as what you hope.