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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似，简历一般包括个人情况，教育背景，个人能力，目标职业等信息。在写简历时，一定要实事求是，不可夸大其词，要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外，还要注意简历的格式和语言，格式要整齐明了，语言要简洁有力。
采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；丰富的使用了长难句；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。
hello,i am very glad to join inthe interview.i hope that i can give you a deep impression with my good preforance.fist,let me introduce myself to you.my name is penny.my original major is the development of rural areas.now apply to english majors.during the nanping campus,i served as deputy head of the press corps.the fist semesters of the ninth ranked professional education.i won the excellence award in the winter return autonomous social practice game. i love to trval and photography,and interested in english.especially when someone speak english fluently,my power is stronger.in order to cultiviate sense of language,i ofen watch videoes on the internet in english recently
