2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句式变化多样；文中词汇多样性稍有欠缺，单词拼写也要更仔细。

with the development of science and techolodge,we can have more way to comunication with people who around us .such as :we can use phone to send message or dail the phone number to communicate our friend or family .this is very easy. with these ways appeared,we seldom connect with people face to face,this is bad for our communication . in my word,use science to help our distance is very good thing ,but face to face communication can help our more ,so i think two of this are sll important.