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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似，简历一般包括个人情况，教育背景，个人能力，目标职业等信息。在写简历时，一定要实事求是，不可夸大其词，要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外，还要注意简历的格式和语言，格式要整齐明了，语言要简洁有力。
从句使用不足，建议增加长句和复杂句的使用；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分。
hello,I am very glad to join inthe interview. I hope that I can give you a deep impression with my good preforance.Fist,let me introduce myself to you.y My name is penny.My original major is the development of rural areas.Now apply to English majors.During the Nanping Campus,I served as deputy head of the press corps.The fist semesters of the ninth ranked professional education.I won the excellence award in the winter return autonomous social practice game. I love to trval and photography,and interested in english.Especially when someone speaking English fluently,my power is stronger.In order to cultivate sense of language,I ofen watch videoes on the internet in English recently
