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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似，简历一般包括个人情况，教育背景，个人能力，目标职业等信息。在写简历时，一定要实事求是，不可夸大其词，要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外，还要注意简历的格式和语言，格式要整齐明了，语言要简洁有力。
简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织。
I am very glad to join in the interview. I hope that I can give you a deep impression with my good preformance.Fist,let me introduce myself to you.My name is penny.My original major is the development of rural areas.Now apply for English majors.During the Nanping Campus,I served as deputy head of the press corps.The fist semesters of the ninth ranked professional education.I won the excellence award in the winter return autonomous social practice game. I love to travel and photography,and interested in English.Especially when someone speaking English fluently,my power is stronger.In order to cultivate sense of language,I often watch videoes on the internet in English recently
