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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:37050
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分70.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰。

用户练习作文:

Dear Zhang Wei, I’m glad to know that you are coming to my city during the summer vacation. However, I’m afraid there’s some bad news. I’m planning to take part in an international conference to be held in another city during the time of your visit. All the top scientists in my field will show up at the conference. More importantly, I’m lucky enough to have been selected to give a speech on behalf of my research team at the Conference. I really can’t miss it. I understand that it’ll be your first time to this city and I’m your only friend here. I’ve asked my roommate to meet you at the airport, and you can stay in my room. He is a very nice person and he will show you around the city. Hope you two will get on well and have a nice holiday! Yours, Li Ming

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