2013年山东英语中考模拟试卷英语作文:关于微笑

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I come from China.I am a Chinese middle school student as well as Ding.I have something to say here.First of all,Ding's behavior is abusolutely wrong.He shouldn't do such thing that is very stupid.Althrough it is a samll action,it broken the whole ancient temple.Besides,I think Ding can not represent all of us.It is just a individual behavior.I will take this accident as an example to teach myself,and tell the others don't do it again.We should be civilized and responsible whenever we are.At last,I want to say sorry for him.However we come from the same country.I hope everybody can forgive him.That will never happen again.