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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36941
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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文章衔接手法恰当;文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用高级词汇可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。

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It is subtly revealed in the portrayal that a young boy is talking with his mother in their house. The boy asks confusingly, “Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything?” We often hear of successful people who are largely “self-taught”. I say largely because, in all cases, they have received some formal teaching, whether it was from a teacher in a classroom, or from parents or a relative at home. In my case, I am glad I always learned from teachers, from fist grade all the way through my Master’s degree. A good teacher adds considerably to the materials contained in the textbooks. In conclusion, it takes a great deal of self-discipline to learn a subject via mobile phones with only self-study, having no guidance or instruction from a teacher. A skilled and talented teacher can add so much richness to what is being learned. I believe it is always better to have a teacher to some degree.

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