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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36980
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分67.0分
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文中词汇使用灵活,高级词汇方面还要多多积累;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。

用户练习作文:

Hello everyone.Today I'm glad to be here to give a speech about my fresh experience in China Agriculture University. First I must say the campus life is really different from what I have experienced in high school.For instance,I used to lean upon my dormitory teacher to wake me up on time.But now I have to set several alarm clocks to make myself could hear them in the morning otherwise I would mimy class.And then even worse there would be nobody remind me except my teacher!So the differences are everywhere and I could easily find them.The change of life is great and it's wonderful:I have more time of my own and the rights to decide how I live. Nowadays,there are too many terrible phenomenons prevelent in the society,such as disloyalty,dishonesty and greed something else.Today let's simply talk about dishonest. Dishonesty can be divided into two types at least.To illustrate in the first place,cheating successfully can make you pathe exam,believe me that won't help you at all.You will not get the repect when you step into the society,because you know nothing but cheating.Now imagining in the second place,in a way,dishonesty can be regarded as lies.Most of malicious lies are written by a selfish heart,only a few of lies are helpful even God will be pretend to close his eyes. After all, i suggest people learning how to treat people,the word from God says that how you treat people ,who will treat you in the same way.

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