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Nowadays,university ranking is extremely widespreaded.People are happy to see the university that they are familiar with ranking front. As a coin has two sides.In the one hand,many parents hold that children are benefit from university ranking.Because it can help them make a good choice when they choose university.In the other hand,some others don't consider university ranking is wise,especially for school chief.They express that the university ranking makes some nuiversity miss good students.Wtht's more,some students would rather choose the university ranking front than go the university which can provide the major they like. In my opinion,we should be in favour of university ranking.University ranking can promote the developing of education.
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