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We are now living in an internet society. It seems that we are overwhelmed in the internet life. Newspapers are talking that the internet age has come. Everything in our daily life can have relationship with internet: in the morning, we may turn on the computer to check whether we have E-mails from friends of abroad; then we can read some latest news from any websites in the world. (大学英语作文 To the internet users, there is no borders between nations. People can contact their friends wherever they are, as long as they are connected to the internet. After a day’s work, you may connect to the internet and do some shopping. Internet makes our lives easy and convenient. So why don’t we turn on the computer and send a birthday card to our father?