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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36980
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;文章层次较为清晰;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。

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We are now living in an internet society. It seems that we are overwhelmed in the internet life. Newspapers are talking that the internet age has come.   Everything in our daily life can have relationship with internet: in the morning, we may turn on the computer to check whether we have E-mails from friends of abroad; then we can read some latest news from any websites in the world. (大学英语作文 To the internet users, there is no borders between nations. People can contact their friends wherever they are, as long as they are connected to the internet. After a day’s work, you may connect to the internet and do some shopping.   Internet makes our lives easy and convenient. So why don’t we turn on the computer and send a birthday card to our father?

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