小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Tom is a lovely and lively boy.We study in Yatai primery school Class3 Grade1.We are deskmate too. Due to he is extremely clever.Accordingly he is nothing but crazy about maths.He is attaching importance to maths.He pays attention to everything. He also likes music.He not only addicted to the piano but also addicted to the Sun.He can’t interfere with other. He thinks it is fun to play the musical instrument. He played the piano at the concert in the The National Grand Theater when he was six.There is no denying that his performance is just extraordinary.I am proud with him. Especially he is frequently ready to help others. What's more he can cope with others too. Tomorrow is his birthday.I will buy a present for him.Give him a pleasantly surprised. I am looking forward to playing well with him nowadays.He will become my lasting throughout life friend.