小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

Tom is a lovely and lively boy.He comes from Shanxi province. He is extremely clever.Accordingly he is nothing but be adept at maths.He is attaching importance to maths.He pays attention to everything. He also likes music.He not only addicted to the piano but also addicted to the Sun.He can’t interfere with other. He thinks it is fun to play the musical instrument. He played the piano at the concert in the The National Grand Theater when he was six.There is no denying that his performance is just extraordinary.I am proud with him. Especially he is frequently ready to help others. What's more he can cope with others too. Tomorrow is his birthday.I will buy a present for him.Give him a pleasantly surprised. I am looking forward to playing well with him nowadays.He will become my lasting throughout life friend.