小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。

Tom is a lovely and lively boy.He comes from Shanxi province. He is an extremely clever boy.Accordingly he is nothing but adept at maths.He also attaching importance to maths.He pays attention to everything。 He also likes music.He not only addicted to the piano but also addicted to the Sun.He can’t interfere with other. He thinks it is fun to play the musical instrument. He played the piano at the concert in the The National Grand Theater when he was six.There is no denying that his performance is just extraordinary.I am proud with him. Especially he is frequently ready to help others. What's more he can cope with others too. Tomorrow is his birthday.I will buy a present for him.Give him a pleasantly surprised. I am looking forward to playing well with him nowadays.He will become my lasting throughout life friend.