小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇使用较丰富，高级词汇使用要加强；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

Tom comes from Shanxi province and he is a lovely and lively boy. He is an extremely clever boy.Accordingly he is nothing but adept at maths.Simultaneously he can also attach importance to maths.The same he pays attention to everything. He also addicted to the music.He adore not only the piano but also the drum.He can’t interfere with other. He thinks it is fun to play the musical instrument. He played the piano at the concert in the The National Grand Theater when he was six.There is no denying that his performance is just extraordinary.I am proud with him. Especially he is frequently ready to help others. What's more he can cope with others too. Tomorrow is his birthday.I will buy a present for him.Give him a pleasantly surprised. I am looking forward to playing well with him nowadays.He will become my lasting throughout life friend.