小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Tom,he's lively、smart and capable boy, one of my best friends. He is a good student, he studied hard work, the results have been in the forefront of the class, he is particularly fond of mathematics, to reach the point of obsession, but he is very interested in scientific knowledge, he likes reading, he read a lot of good books. He is also addicted to music. His music is very good, he joined the school choir, he can play the piano, will play Sax. When he sings or practicing, she can be absorbed in. He thought playing musical instruments was very interesting. When he was six years old, he played the piano in the National Grand Theater Concert, not to deny that his performance is not ordinary, I think his music accomplishment half is talent, generally is his own efforts to form. Not only that, he is always ready to help others. He can handle other people. Tomorrow is his birthday, I want to make a creative gift to him, give him a surprise. I'm looking forward to playing with him. He will be my friend.