小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；请作者增加高级词汇的使用，不过单词拼写做的很好；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

Tom is one of my best friends.He is a clever,capable and versatile boy. He studies in NO.1 primery school.He studies real hard.The result has been in the forefront of the class. He especially likes mathematics, to the point that fascinated. At the same time he of scientific knowledge very interested in.He likes to read.He reads a lot of books, such as Grimm's fairy tales, forest reported, Chinese history, world geography. He is also addicted to music. His music is very good.He joined the school choir.He can play the piano, will play Sax. When he sings or practicing, she can be absorbed in. He thought playing musical instruments is very interesting. He played the piano in the National Grand Theater Concert when he was six..I think his music accomplishment half is talent, generally is his own efforts to form. He is a member of the class, she loves the class, often to help students, and students get along friendly. He played with me very well, we often together, whether in study or in life, he gave me much help.Tomorrow is his birthday.I will buy a present for him.Give him a pleasantly surprised.I am looking forward to playing with him better, he will be my friend in my life.