小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；文章衔接手法恰当；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足。

Tom, one of my best friends, he is a clever and capable, versatile boy. He is an excellent primary and secondary school student, he studies hard, the result has been in the forefront of the class. He especially likes mathematics, to the point that fascinated. At the same time, he of scientific knowledge very interested in, he liked to read, he read a lot of books, such as Grimm's fairy tales, forest reported, Chinese history, world geography. He is also addicted to music. His music is very good, he joined the school choir,he can play the piano, play the zither. When he sings or practicing, she can be absorbed in. He thought playing musical instruments was very interesting. When he was six years old, he played the piano in the National Grand Theater Concert, not to deny that his performance is not ordinary, I think his music accomplishment half is talent, generally is his own efforts to form. He is a member of the class, she loves the class, often to help students, and students get along friendly. He played with me very well, we often together, whether in study or in life, he gave me a lot of help. Tomorrow is his birthday, I want to make a creative gift to him, give him a big surprise. I am looking forward to playing with him better, he will be my friend in my life.