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句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；请作者增加高级词汇的使用，单词拼写做的很好；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。
Time flies, Time flies like a shuttle. I k3654 the unhurried Chang'e flight back to hometown. Since the chance of going abroad to study abroad, I have not returned to this sacred territory for twenty years. Just a plane, I am full of hope for home. Just from the airport, one out, I was stopped by a young man said: "Sir, please show your gold VIP green card." I'm a bit not a taste (because in the United States, it is not for this card). I was very angry and said to him: "you Laotaibuxiao, do what is not good. Have to come out to deceive people, the United States did not have the gold VIP green card, even if there is, I do not know how." The young man, turn over. He had a button behind him. I have a press, a tablet computer. 'this drama of the plot is too' cold '. 'I shouted.' I'm in the flat panel to check out the gold VIP green card and the change in China in recent years. To see 781st to know that China has developed rapidly in recent years. Has become the world's' leader 'in the ancient lost land has been China's total recall. And China has developed a humanoid robot, free of charge. Then I see light suddenly, the original just that handsome young man I was a chat robot...... The rooster became dragon, magnificent. I was in the moment, seems to forget what. Suddenly wanted to pull up. It seems like I'm missing a card. Button automatic. He kindly said: Sir, please show me a golden VIP green card, I said: "I do not know that there is such a card so not for......" He said: "this right, you say your name, and ID number can be. 3 seconds out of card." I said: "I called Lee XX ID number: 1523XXXXXXXXXXXXXX." Not 3 seconds to really out of the card. I was in a confused state of mind as though someone had called me. "Baby, wake up. And the sun goes down. I slowly got out of bed with a sound "Hey, it was a dream. ' I told the dream to pull my mother. Mother said: "although you feel a little pity, but this is just your ideal home, if you really want to have a home, you should strive to excel, to the development of our hometown more beautiful and rich. "Do you understand? I came to the living room. Write this raises a words: "listen to your words, than from ten years of reading. I will not let my mother down, for the beautiful and rich Chinese hometown of hard work and hard work." Maybe this is my goal to never give up loyalty oath. Mother's words make me a lifetime benefit.
