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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者要注意增加使用高级词汇，单词拼写做的挺好；作者在句法层面做的很棒。
The fate of a person sometimes is doomed, though you probably will do my best to resist, even desperate a stroke, but in the power of the whole world, their unwilling and indomitable will seem so naive. And when really to see through their own way, even if at this time has come to an end, will respectfully is a powerful force, never because of the absurd and darken, but will for himself so insignificant struggle and shock, and proud! Such a bleak and small life, but it is also living the same wonderful, although the silence in the whole world, but in the large flow, but in the plain and it seems so fierce, so exciting! -- the preface of the paper. Even if he is unwilling, how to resist, but also can not resist the eyes of the people who eat, this is only a life of the hand! What's more, he's just a clown, what else? He had to quietly pick up a dog in the street, it seems that he had escaped from his home. Before the dog is how hateful, it followed its master unbridled, like any legal, moral totally not afraid, in the eyes of poor clown, he, like the master and disgusting, this is only thought in my mind, see the Secretary, or to brimming with smile posted up, like the dog close to his master. The dog is indeed that made him dislike, but this strange, his bad luck, the dog also was down on his luck, his regiment full in charge of the director of the beam of the house, and the dog but from the director of the home, without their master to accompany it. It's like a stray dog at this time! Wind evil evil wind, the stray dog stirred it yellow, it trembling, not just in the heating or frozen muscle muscle pumping, before it in the director's home, where will "enjoy" to such treatment, every day it slept kennel warmer than the clown's home! But now, what is it like? What is wrong is the director of dry out? Clown timid bad day, director of forced devoid of the regiment, and just met it once insult dog, to take a breath education it some of the! Poor people pity poor people! Even a dog and the same! Let's go, today let you, you go, the clown to sigh. The clown no longer takes care of the abandoned dog, since it was abandoned, and it must not be a competent dog, he thought, and began to sympathize with the dog. He is still to go, although I do not know to go where, he the pile in the building a petite nest, how also not prosperous up, besides now also didn't eat the guy, he is back, and how to do it? Suddenly the calf tingling, he bite the teeth of a stuffy hum, look around, is the dog. The damn dog ah, with is a poor man, why to bully the poor clown, he is not so lonely?! Clown where want to so much, a kick, stray dogs flew to the place, he according to bear his anger the, simply with a stray dog play together. His foot kick, is at the top of the dog's stomach, the dog rolling several laps, grunting sound, then stood up and staggered, a lame one stop away. The clown was still breathing, but he did not go, just watching the dog step by step back. The dog is dead. Like he was killed by him, but what's going on, he can't get it. That was the second day of the beam director told him to go to the Bureau, told him that the dog died. He was a nervous, then don't believe, with some trepidation, such as the Secretary to speak, he was in a sweat. The director took the table, a slap in the face of the past, Li denounced the way; "you think that the dog is for you to play? It's just that you're not qualified to touch it. You're not qualified to touch it! Do you think you are who ah, director of dog are you playing this one! Get out of here. Guys don't want to take it back. Get out, don't let me see you! "Clown mind buzzing, a cool, the blast of hot, a moment of clarity is a burst of and blurred, and bounced out of the station, not knowing what to do. This can be done! He is now really cornered the dandy in the street to see whether they can find a recruit entertainer of the shop, after all, and the craft, can live to eat. But just killed the home secretary in the dog, the Mancheng greatly small shop, floor, which dare to accept him? What a shelter he got? He had a touch of a day, and he did not eat, drink or find a shop. He walked back to his next to the nest, and fell asleep, not dry what, there is nothing he can do, he vaguely see yourself before, such a large stage, so many audience, his skill is how high ah, riding a unicycle can also turn the ball, the audience throwing flowers to come over, he was wrapped in happiness. A gust of cold wind blowing, he made a shiver, opened his eyes, can not see the stars of the sky. Not far away, he seemed to see the familiar stray dog, and he spat at him. He is really rotten luck, he is just a clown, in addition to have flowers and applause, he faced the director and the hateful dog, he tried to resist strike, down strike, but also do what? Only in sighing silently all gone.
