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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；能较灵活地使用高级词汇，希望能改善用词单一的情况；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分。
Dear KOPH This is Hubin, I knew the code number 5670 of your new products during my trip at exhibition on Dec.15th in New York. I am very interest in your products. Therefore, Can I have your price list and instruction? Thanks for your cooperation. Hoping we can establish business relationship in soon. Thanks! Best Regards. HuBin.
