英语三级B卷作文模拟附范文:拟通知

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Notice A visit has been arranged to the Nanlin Farm of Qinglong Country on June 20th, 2010. The itinerary includes: 8:30 a.m. The farm office, a brief introduction to the farm by the general manager 9:30 a.m. A visit to the farm 10:30 a.m. Visit the farm-run factory 11:30 a.m. Farmers’ homes Those who want to go are expected to gather in front of the library at 6:30. The bus will leave at 6:40 a. m.