2003年6月英语四级作文真题:描述你所见到的车祸情况

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

traffic jams are very comely seen in big cities，and a big headache for citizens，in rush hour the whole city is like a huge parking lot。cause of traffic jams makes many people feel bad，there are made an accident In Beijing on Saturday，it's very shock ，three cars getting collision ，those cars structure getting changed。